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Re: NFC: Simply Natives Website
Tough crowd.....Heck I'll play around with it somemore ....:)
On Wed, 21 Jul 1999 09:17:26 -0400 Chris Hedemark
<hedemark at raleigh_ibm.com> writes:
>robert a rice wrote:
>
>> If anyone with some HTML experience wants to take a crack at
>sprucing up
>> a small website contact me privatly....I started a website to
>showcase
>> the erp cichlids and some common native look it over
>>
>> http://homepages.msn.com/PetsPl/cichlidseller/simplynatives.html
>
>I like. But a couple of nits that will help it tremendously:
>
>1) Lose the background. It is inconsistent with the content of the
>site. If you use a background, turn the brightness up on it so it
>doesn't stand out so strongly. Makes the text harder to read when it
>is
>as dark as it is.
>
>2) An editor is needed. :) Unfortunately when a web site makes use
>of
>less than perfect grammar, spelling, and punctuation it reduces the
>credibility of the author in the eyes of the reader. Starting a
>sentence off with a question mark is one example I see on the page.
>Or
>ending a statement with a period followed by a question mark. Little
>nits like that detract from an otherwise very good page.
>
>3) What exactly is Simply Natives? Is it a corporation? A
>non-profit
>organization? Affiliated with NFC or other group? This should be
>stated clearly somewhere on the page. Possibly embedded within a
>mission statement.
>
>Not hammering it, Robert. Just trying to pass on some constructive
>criticism so it can look as professional as it deserves.
>
>--
>
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