>Except in this one I land on what I think is the bottom of the river >bed.......but it's really something else...........a 12 foot long Gar. >Then >the bottom itself moves and takes off on me........ YES. Sounds like a good twist to introduce on page two. OK. Need to give you some time to flesh out the "rest of the story." Bob Alston BobAlston9 at AOL_com .