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re: Concept for Tom Barr's next story...

>Except in this one I land on what I think is the bottom of the river
>bed.......but it's really something else...........a 12 foot long Gar.
>the bottom itself moves and takes off on me........

YES.  Sounds like a good twist to introduce on page two.

OK.  Need to give you some time to flesh out the "rest of the story."

Bob Alston
BobAlston9 at AOL_com